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©2006-2009 ~Dojang
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when i finished this pic, i was remembering a particularily fine moment of my marital arts history...

it was a wintery tasmanian dawn, and i was out at my mountain dojang (and when i say 'mountain dojang' what i mean is a kicking-bag tied to a tree branch) in a jumper(not a hoody) and shorts (to aid in the flexibility of my kicks) ...a cold sun rose through the trees, and i just took a short moment to collect my thoughts, think about who i was, where i was going, exactly what i wanted from life......then i exhaled a small cloud of white and continued to beat the living crap out of my bag...

i thought about using a clear sky instead of the dojang wall, but then i decided i liked the texture too much...and i liked the feeling the red breath gave too...i gave some thought to 'heating' the skin, y'know, giving it a warmer colour, or even a glow, but i eventually decided against it...a little too corny...

anyway, i tried to take in as much of your useful advice as possible, if i missed anything, tell me! i seem to remember my forgetting sommit really, really important!

i think in future I'll ask you guys for more advice, i mean, i prolly never would have mucked with those lighting effects if it hadn't been for 's advice, and a few of you suggested i darken that shadow on the inside of the hood...it's your pic...

nasty, verging on abusive crit appreciated!

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:icona-distorted-reality:
^_^, I really like the adjustments man. Nice job.

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I like the style, cept im not feeling the coldness you described, would have been nice to have some fog
or something.
But its still goin in my faves coz i can relate to it.

tish

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Your best work yet .. really..

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:icongrandmotheryen:
The hood looks flat on the side, and I still don't like the steam coming from yo' mouth. But the colouring is good, and the rest.

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:iconshin-metzen:
I really like the CG style you used and the lensflare like effect you added.

Though i must say that there isn't much "Coldness" feel on this pic, i think that maybe another BG or some fog would give that feeling better. Still i think that this is a great work! :D

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Eh, looks great! Not much else to add now...

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:icondojang:
i dunno...it's an indoors pic...i think fog would kinda kill any credibility it has left...but thankyou for your comment! (wanders off to look at your gallery)

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thankyou!

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